Haha wow
What I find so funny about this, is that I just read this. Like last week. and everything in that flash i completely understood! That was great!
To anyone who may diss it because they have no idea whats going on, read the book. It will make ALOT more sense!
Good job!
Filter
Dude this whole flash has been filter raped. All I see are bevels, glows, and blurs. Why so many filters?! Cut down on them!
Story wasnt bad, I'll give you that. Kinda funny. The dancing was mediocre. There were only 2 things that happened, the left-right-left claw thing and the shoulder raise. Kinda boring if you ask me.
Well that was my 2 cents, see ya!
okay lol i love bevels they help for graeat shading
Well...
The comedy of it was alright, I liked it! But when it comes to the animation iself Ive got some comments about it:
"Heretic": The beginning wasnt all that good. The sound overpowered the voices and kind of cancelled out the comedic effect you were trying to show. The voices themselves sounded like the person didnt want to yell out. Like with the 'worting' (lol), it sounded like you were holding back, almost trying to whisper. Also there were too many gradients and radials. You might want to cut down on those a little ;)
"Return to sender": It was good. The backrounds looked great! But whats up with MC's running at the beginning? His upper body made him look like his legs were stiff or something. Too much bobbing left and right. Some of the voices were too quiet to hear. The comedy was a little dry for me. Didn't like it that much, but all and all a good animation!
"Delta Halo": An ok animation. I loved the story though! That was pretty funny XD ! But the character design was bad for my taste. Theres two things about them that I dont like, 1. Heads are too big. I know that may be your style, and Im not trying to correct it, but its just not very human. It looks too ackward :-/ . 2. Their eyes are frickin' huge, man! Whats the deal with their eyes being almost as big as their bodies?! WTF?! But, then again, having small eyes with a head that big would make it look wierd, right? MC's body was also brighter than his head. It would have matched if it was a bit darker! Good job!
"Once again with feeling": I really disliked the beginning to that one. A couple comments, Whats up with the guards? Do they have ants in their pants or something? Their body's (especially their legs) kept figiting and moving around even though they were just standing there. WTH?! Whats the deal with the prophet just sitting there with an unhappy grin on his face while the flood spore comes out of nowhere and attacks him? In fact, why did nothing happen? The gaurds didnt move, there was no voice to say something like "Look out!", just nothing. It came out of nowhere and attacked him. Kind of cutting corners if you ask me! Lastly, the objects and tweens. Most parts in an animation use objects and tweens to easily make movement (like walking) without drawing or redrawing frames, and most animations do it effectively without it being noticable and giving it a natural flow. But this one couldn't quite do it. The tweening was off and the objects were too noticable to be natural. But it made me laugh, so its not all bad :D
"Delusions": Wow. Just wow. That was awesome! I havent laughed like that in a while! Nice! Now I really dont have much to say about this, because it was pretty good! All I have to say is maybe a little character shading? Or at least make them darker because some were too light when they should be a liiiitle more dark. A good example is the Chieften, he could have been a little darker in terms of brightness. Thats about it!
Great work guys!
Uhh
Did you use a mouse or the laptop touch pad for this? Honestly the lines look aweful. You should probably get a tablet, thats what practically every computer animator uses. A decent one at a good price is the "Bamboo" or the "Bamboo Fun". Also, add voices if you want to attract a bigger audience. That means you also need to get a good mic. You can get a cheap desktop one that has semi-decent sound quality at a low price, or you can get a GOOD one for a little bit more, unfortunetealy the good ones only really sell online and rarely is there a store that would have them. Thats about all you need, good luck!
He didnt make the song
I heard this song a while ago. Did you credit the creators of the song?
twice man. TWICE.
FINALLY!
After loads and loads of crap submissions, we get a GOOD ONE! WOOHOO!!! Nice work! Loved it!
Wow, thanks!
Needs work
Im not a fan of this kinda stuff, but heres my review.
First of all, the audio was good. The lip syncing seemed ok.
Second, Whats with the arms? The way they moved was ackward. It didnt seem real enough.
Third, whats with everyone and shapes? Can nobody draw anymore? It makes things look better when everything isnt make of squares and shapes.
Finally, there was only like 1 shot of the front of them. Who wants to watch a movie of a couple life-less robots just standing there singing? Add more angles.
Ill give you an '10' for effort. Good Luck!
Amazing
Im not even going to ask where you got or how you made those sound FX because it was just right on! Loved it!
Well I'm gonna tell you anyway, and maybe other people can read it. :D LUCKY YOU!!!!
AIMG0 walking = me tapping my fingernails on a plastic shaving mirror
Electric servo-motor noises = sampled from my scanner
Metallic scrunching sounds = Tin cans, cutlery, my bed frame, and plastic coke bottles
Static hiss = me NOT moving away from the mic to breathe OUT (lol)
I had to download the lightning and explosion sounds from free sound effects sites, however.
Cool
Something about the movie didnt feel right. I felt like the story was being rushed and that things happened too fast. Sometimes it just felt too artificial and bland. The part where the guy in the car mentions his family just felt too out of place, like it didnt need to be there. Now the coloring: Whats the deal with all these gradiants and radials? Sure they're good but it seems like they were everywhere! And whats with all these dark colors? Where are the warm colors? Glowing was used but it seemed to work. Just too much black, red, and blue. Sometimes there were solid colors that should have been gradiants and vice versa. Not enough light to offset the dark. Finally, moving parts (a.k.a. "Objects"). There are waay to many objects in this. Where are the Frame-by-frames? Its not so much Im complaining about all of the movies with objects, but this one just dosent seem to use them effectively. It doesnt seem realistic!
Other than that the movie seemed to work. The story was ok though! All in all, not too bad. I know I complained about alot but the movie works.
WTF
OMFG BEST ANIMATION EVAR NEED MOAR PLZ!!!
Also, are you having problems with the eraser? I keep seeing lines and circles that I just saw a second ago. Along with little lines everywhere.
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